This is my second short story. Mickey is going to ask his ex-best friend, Manny, to do the same thing that broke their friendship twenty years earlier.
I’ve been writing stage plays for about 30 years and screenplays for about three and recently decided I wanted to learn how to write short stories as a new challenge. I’m working my way through an online course that’s based in London. A couple of weeks ago I completed my first story, about 5 pages. I received feedback from the folks in London and this is what they wrote: A delightful story that really brought your characters to life. Brilliant work!
Brilliant? Where do I go from here? Maybe I should stop now. LOL
Please share and constructive comments are welcome.